Feedback Unit #5

 

Hi Karla,

I enjoyed reading through the information provided on your group’s webpage. Although all women are probably familiar with what a urinary tract infection is, the explanation of the condition and the breakdown of the different types was very educational. As a person with an elderly grandmother who is experiencing a cognitive and physical decline, UTIs are a constant issue that arises. I appreciated how the videos and the photos on the webpage were in line with the written information, and it was nice to see subheadings placed before each section, so that I could prepare myself for the content to come.

 

There were only a few recommendations that I’d like to mention, with the first being a word of advice. There were a couple of grammatical errors (an extra letter was tagged onto the end of a word). It was clear that it was a mistake, but proofreading before submitting would have caught the error. Another thing that I’d like to recommend citing all the photos and the videos that were included in this webpage, so that the original author obtains the credit for the work. I noticed that there were some photos that had included a citation, but not all.

 

Overall, I really enjoyed the information provided on your group’s webpage.

-Brittany