Unit 6 Feedback (Complementary Medicine)

 Hello Karla, 

 

The website page for complementary medicine for elderly years was very organized. Chronic pain is something many older people face and struggle with. You provided a lot of information using evidence based data which made it more interesting to read. I also enjoyed that you added a chart that displays what chronic pain is which makes it easier for the reader to learn more about your topic. I also enjoyed that you provided examples of different types of chronic pain and how elderly women cope with chronic pain. The chart you provided did not have a description. I would add a sentence explaining the chart to make it easier for the audience to read and understand why this chart is important. I also would provide more detailed examples. For example, you mentioned in your paragraph that lifestyle modifications may positively impact chronic pain. I would add 2-3 examples of lifestyle modification that can help women deal with chronic pain. I also enjoyed that you provided videos for the readers to watch on complementary treatment such as Pilates. The paragraphs on Pilates section were detailed and cohesive. You provided great examples of how Pilates as a treatment can help elderly women with chronic pain.  Overall I enjoyed the videos you shared and they were great examples of how Pilates can help as a treatment.